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A Dance Sublime
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A Dance Sublime |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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As we shared the dance our hearts beating together to a song we'll hear well into forever my eyes were on each step you took though I pretended not to look. But the world disappeared just went away so I kept my eyes on you that day, as lost in time we twirled around. I felt as if we left the ground. Dancing across the bands of time treasured forever a dance sublime. WhiteRose |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
...beautiful. It's all i need to say, though i could say more. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sounds like a waltz to remember  Well done! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Jason Member
since 2002-07-31
Posts 72Macon, GA |
White Rose, a rose by any other name......no, none other than White Rose could write quite the same a poem with rhyme or romantic prose it seems a good day when I see the White Rose Jason Practiced in the Art of Perception [This message has been edited by Jason (08-08-2002 01:07 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is wonderful, I wish for this dance to always fill your heart with loves true rhythm! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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