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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I am skycap of orchil wearing my new eye shoes paired lichens with scent scuff ruff emboss me deep sigh splintered as the wings of orcinus born gift me the sea wolf's shiver slivers on my glower skin iniquity benight with bat my monks robe sandals bathe my jersey tattoos in blue black lack devoid with zero'd naught to zilch zip nil from lady laden's scoring, savage torn like wax cufflinks from armless sleeves grieved coil this hose of pipe mouth breath and hang it home sided useless limp with hands of august soothed ruthless ruth some summer dollar sorrow now, named game. ©Dark |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
somehow? you always surprise me--your words are strung together like glyphs--and? ya gotta stop making me wake up, when I oughtta be going to bed!  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms serene..I'm up...you should be too (grin) thanks for the read, will be interesting to see what image you get stuck with in this one.. slow hugs to you babe. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger No matter the name it is a game. But I never figured you for a flower. LOL |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm going to politely take Sy's comment one step further...you're not the flower, but the seed from which it sprung... good stuff here... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sy, thanks my friend...will hint it this way...if they go on strike again, they will bat a big zero in my attending and will be purple bruised in the popular vote. (grin). sunshine, good morning ms coffee scent wake up...that was sweet of you to wave me that way. Thanks to you for your touch. [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-08-2002 08:41 AM).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Well..you know how I feel about the game..but I love my idea better. NIN... Read that in the paper and grin..Your words always grant me brain a workout. Sincerely, Reg |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good morning, DS To dizzy and back with this word puzzle. It is mouth twist words and so interesting to read more than once. Please give me a little light. Hugs! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There is no joy in Mudville... Casey went on strike. ya look good in those shoes and jersey stripes |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
publish, publish, publish.....  you are the words sir.... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! I agree, you are more than just the flower but your words always seems to be like the seed that sprouts so many wonderful thoughts! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
regina; ok you get a girls team and me and my gang will play ya...but you gotta wear dresses and look be girly k? thanks hon for the review. msmartie...baseball strike...lol, although I don't watch it anymore (since the last one) I just had to explore the idea again. thanks little neighbor. janetmarie, ok so you saw through the dugout fence huh? darn moth's, can't fool em at all. Thanks so much babe for your eyes. Vandana, humble thanks to you. Lauren, thanks lady friend, I will if you will (wink) thanks for your reads and comments lady friend. Noah, thanks my friend for the reviews, I appreciate you much sir. |
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