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Open Poetry #21

Odd

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2002-07-31 04:09 PM

Odd

euphoric day
greets the morn
odd
not much difference
twixt yesterday
and today
save
a few degrees
less sizzle

no drizzle
lots of sunshine
gentle breezes
just as
days ago
in a row

why
euphoria
why
“all’s right
with the world,”
well
my world,

unless I ponder
circumstances,
but
why
get into that?
go ahead,
slip on
euphoria,
I dare ya!

go
ahead
let the day
carry you away
in its invitation’s
play,
okay?

“Okay!”

©July 31, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

1 posted 2002-07-31 04:14 PM

nicely done!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2002-08-05 02:59 AM

well put!

Samantha G Kennedy
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 131
Kent England

3 posted 2002-08-06 06:05 PM

VAS it's good to go with the flow ~ and ou so nicely have here!

this is one to read aloud and let the tongue roll away each word....it has a happy step...i found myself smiling

Good write...love it!!

Sammie

^i^

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

4 posted 2002-08-07 07:01 AM

Not so odd..uplifting and positive. I like the message in this.

Sincerely,
Reg

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2002-08-08 12:53 PM

Odd, that you get rain or od that you get sunshine?

I love it, Virginia! Well done, indeed!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Jason
Member

since 2002-07-31

Posts 72
Macon, GA

6 posted 2002-08-08 12:59 PM

Vas,

fast paced fun, well done
keep it up, for everyone
entertain us all, with another one
or at least I will enjoy your puns

enjoyed it, really
Jason

Practiced in the Art of Perception

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