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bags123
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0 posted 2002-08-08 09:18 AM




Forever and a Sunday

You know me even better
than I'm prone to know myself.
Read all my secret tragedies,
then nurse me back to health.

Your loving fire consumes me
how it rages,dancing sparks
Its embers guide me safely home
from paths which get too dark

I'll wrap your hands in silken gloves
The fingers of my fate
My destiny is linked to yours
in worlds which we create.

So,..Forever and a Sunday,
I'll be mesmerized by you
Without you there, for me to stare,
I'm blind, without a clue.

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-08-08 09:18 AM



Just don't go blind...

enjoyed this, bags...

Madame Chipmunk
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2 posted 2002-08-08 01:02 PM


I love the romance here, Bags

I'll wrap your hands in silken gloves
The fingers of my fate
My destiny is linked to yours
in worlds which we create.

~ hugs from a chipmunk poet

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

arthur
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3 posted 2002-08-09 11:41 AM


precise and to the point
a nice write
arthur

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4 posted 2002-08-09 08:26 PM




(smiles) And may your love always wear your heart like a velvet glove and fondle it with care and compassion,s weet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-08-09 08:30 PM


great romance and great poetry here - loved it - paul
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