"Bye", gone days (a little humour, perhaps...)

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Open Poetry #21

"Bye", gone days (a little humour, perhaps...)

Jason
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since 2002-07-31

Posts 72
Macon, GA

0 posted 2002-08-06 03:36 PM

Please tell me why
to the naked I
the days go, "bye"
so fast sometimes
that eye can't find
the passing time
that once was mine
as if, aye, blind
when the days go by.

Jason Daniels

Practiced in the Art of Perception

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2002-08-08 10:27 AM

And the older you get, the faster they fly. *S* I enjoyed this... welcome to Passions!

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2002-08-08 11:13 AM

Gotta sleep with your eyes open, maybe?..

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-08-08 01:50 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh Jason, this is wonderful, sweet friend, this is a powerful monorhyme, I love it and this is also wonderfully amusing, we all love you so much! You have such a beautfiul heart, sweet Jason, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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