Open Poetry #21 |
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Leaving Part Of Me Behind |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
I'm leaving part of me behind After I've taken my final breath I hope that parts of me live on In the days after my death I've decided to donate my organs To those who struggle to live I want to leave a good impression Of myself I have much to give Maybe a child will receive my liver To improve his life tenfold Which will give his life more quality And allow him to grow old I hope my heart will go on beating So then my death won't be in vain Parts of me will go on living Freeing others from their pain The recipient of my kidneys May be a father who is facing death Who'll receive my gift of life Allowing him more than one last breath My eyes may go on seeing From within another's soul To give to someone in need Is to me the ultimate goal I feel proud to be a donor How I wish there were many more So won't you please consider Allow your heart to open its door I am in motion |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I believe everyone should give their organs after their death, for there is always another special person in need of them to live and it to me is also a good feeling to save anothers life! (kiss on cheek) You are a true angel, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I just decided to be a donor a few years ago. I'm not so sure if I have anything useful, but if so, I hope it would save someone else. Hugs Sandra |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue, this is a beautiful poem of courage and giving....of an unselfish heart that desires to help with the greatest gift that one could ever give... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I, too, am marked as an organ donor. But the problem is, I want to wear all of my parts out myself. So we will just have to see. But this is an excellent plea to remind folks that it is one of the best ways of giving life through death. Well done, Sue! |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Sue, you have the most beautiful heart. To me, so long as the soul leaves with me, everything else is secondary. I salute your courage, and have to tell you I really appreciate these lines so very muchly: "I hope my heart will go on beating So then my death won't be in vain Parts of me will go on living Freeing others from their pain" *hugs* marie Keep counting your blessings |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a beautiful poem with a very important message - Sue this is great!!! Paul |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Great poem and attitude! Thanks for sending me the link. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is a beautiful poem about wonderful gifts you will bestow. I wish I could do the same, but because I have cancer...my organs would probably do more harm than good to someone who is already compromised... but I do admire your generosity, Sue... as well as your writing. ![]() Lyra |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Gosh Sue, what a wonderful, selfless and loving act of kindness. There are so many people who need organ donations to survive. I just saw on the news tonight a former football player (American football not soccer!) who received a transplant on 9/11. He said it is a day he will never forget for it's bittersweet memories. God bless you...Love ya, Marti |
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