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To Her (slightly revised)
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To Her (slightly revised) |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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When you suddenly made your entrance into my monotone life, like lightening, I stood, transcended by each sentence, as I versified you in my writing. I recited your every syllable, knew your stresses like the back of my hand. You became the very symbol of what I reached for with my pen. You became my haunting adventure, as I hunted for you with my rhymes. In the fetters of letters, I held you for each one of your wonderful crimes. And now, rather hopeless, you gaze at me from the snow-white plains of the page, but I can’t let you soar away gracefully from the warmth of my heart -- your cage. [This message has been edited by Master (08-07-2002 11:41 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Master~ Exquisite~ You are a wonderful writer ... let's kick this one to the top for a go-round~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you Marge, you're always so kind. HUGS, M |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Absolutely lovely. Enjoyed very much. There are a million messages, |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Excellent write - powerfully said! Enjoyed it very much - Paul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
THIS IS FANTASTIC!!!! Enjoyed thoroughly!! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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