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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Always The day grows long as I wait for you and all too short when you haven't appeared. I don't seem to see you except when I close my eyes and find you here with me.... so I close them often, to be assured of you. I take a step or two back when the radio plays the oldies, knowing where I was then, wondering where you are now and if you close your eyes do you feel me with you... always. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
I relaly, really like this. I'm not sure what about this makes it so special, I can't describe it. Maybe I just understand the feelings in it. I'm not sure, but I love it. "The day grows long as I wait for you and all too short when you haven't appeared." I LOVE the first stanza. Tai |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I don't seem to see you except when I close my eyes and find you here with me.... so I close them often, to be assured of you. I really like this part and enjoyed the whole poem. Thank you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Tai...well all a poet can ask is for someone to feel from the words she writes..thank you *s M WhiteRose, thank you and welcome..I am sure you will enjoy the many fine poets here. *s M |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Very nice. You express the universal theme of longing very well. Nice read. SimplyGold |
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