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Sven
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0 posted 2002-08-07 04:28 PM


Hail Mary, full of grace
welcome me home again
       welcome me back
back to where my heart knew its first beat
back to where my soul heard its first song
       back
             to you
to the place where being and time flow together
       in Eternity's ocean
             a place that I've set sail for again
wind at the ready and waves calm and gentle
       carrying me back to myself
             and foward to itself

the Lord is with thee
it's been a while, but I still remember
       sitting at your feet
             standing at your side
learning the steps
             "the dance of life" you called it
and, I wondered why I really had to be alive
when being what I was
       was infinitely better
the calling touched me for the first time
and I slept, dreaming of what was
       not knowing what was to be
then, I awoke
              alive

blessed art thou among women
and blessed is the fruit of thy womb, Jesus

born into life from being, I became
       clothed in the fabric of life, I found questions
              threads of thought to be pulled and spun
until, at the end, I would find
              (quite simply) another end
never knowing (then) that all I really had to do
     was tie the
                  two ends together
  the question answered
                                    the answer questioned
but yet, still hearing the trumpet call out the unanswered question
I waited with the player
                         until the echo stopped
                                                  and listened

Holy Mary, Mother of God
       pray for us sinners
              now and at the hour of our death. Amen.

*BONG*
          *BONG*
                 *BONG*

              the answering knell sang out over the hills
*BONG*death is not the end
          *BONG*life is not the beginning
                    *BONG*being is eternal
fly with the wind
             swim with the water
                                    walk with the ground
weep not for what you think you have lost
             weep for what you have not yet found

the dreaming shows the way
                             come
                                                                  take my hand

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2002 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-07 04:46 PM


Powerfully written sir Sven....


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2 posted 2002-08-07 08:06 PM


"*BONG*
          *BONG*
                 *BONG*
              the answering knell sang out over the hills
*BONG*death is not the end
          *BONG*life is not the beginning
                    *BONG*being is eternal"




(smiles) YES, YES!!! Oh Sven, you are so very wise in your words, sweet friend, every end only leads to a new beginning for it is the tapestry of eternal promise and every new life is a thread attached to it! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-08-14 01:05 AM


you know..I can't believe this is so many pages over. Its a damn shame someone passed this over.

Beautiful
you always inspire me with these.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Magicmystery
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4 posted 2002-09-04 09:48 AM


This series should be read in order to gain a full apprediation for the richness of expression found here and in the first one.on to part 3


Sherry Gardner

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

[This message has been edited by Magicmystery (09-04-2002 10:07 AM).]

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