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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-08-06 08:12 PM


Voices Of Heart

Her whispered yes makes his heart beat
His reply of oh brings her to quick heat
Softly her words carry him on
Thrillingly she dives into his song
The touch of her heart keeps him true
The feel of his soul fills her all through
He anchors her gives her a base
She fills his life with her tender grace

His voice covers her with delight
Her voice caresses him in the night
Two souls that connected as one
Two hearts feeling joy under one sun
His name on her lips keeps him near
His voice the one that scatters the fear
Too far apart in time and space
Reduced to touching the screen in trace

His voice makes the night feel so right
Her voice illumes the sky and breathes light
Wherever he is her voice is too
In love with hope she says they’ll get through
Her faith in his love lights her heart
Her smile in his soul will n’er depart
Their trust in love keeps them both warm
Together they shelter from pains storm

Marsha


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2002-08-06 08:15 PM


This is a wonderfully warm and inspirational piece Marsha. Though distance may sometimes be far, it is amazing how the minds can connect. Beautifully captured.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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2 posted 2002-08-06 08:24 PM


Mushy, darling heart,  you have outdone
yourself....exceptional poem dear heart.

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3 posted 2002-08-06 08:27 PM


Marsha, this is incredibly beautiful!
Outstanding write!
Enjoyed so much by this reader.
~Hugs~

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2002-08-06 08:29 PM


MarshaLove~
I thought I heard heart-whispers in the forum~

'Too far apart in time and space
Reduced to touching the screen in trace'


Oh sweetie .. I just love the tenderness of it~
You excel in the romantic writes dear heart~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 2002-08-06 08:51 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love the voices you associate in your gorgeous poems, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-08-06 08:52 PM


Marsha - their trust in love keeps them warm. How true, how true, sweet one...

BC

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7 posted 2002-08-06 11:29 PM


Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh Marsha...you mushy, mushy soul! Did you have to go and get me all misty now? And me here without a tissue! ~sniff~ How utterly beautiful, though beautiful seems a small definition of this exquisitely romantic ballad...dear lady, you have surpassed yourself with this one! Exceptional piece I just adore it! ((((hugs))))
Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2002-08-06 11:34 PM


Oh what a beautiful love poem, Marsha...
Now I know why you are called "Mushy".
This is so very romantic.
~ hugs from your chipmunk friend

Lyra

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9 posted 2002-08-06 11:56 PM


His . . .
Her . . .
and finally
their . . .

so sentimentally touching, Maasha....
my gosh this good!  
Say Hi to the Mushettes for me!
jeff

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10 posted 2002-08-06 11:58 PM


What Lyra said . . .

Sweet romance!


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11 posted 2002-08-07 02:42 AM


Oh Marsha, how very lovely and sweet, just wanna close my eyes and breathe slowly again...

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

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12 posted 2002-08-07 10:33 AM


Their trust in love keeps them both warm
Together they shelter from pains storm

I love how you blend your thoughts..always lovely Marsha...leaving a warm feeling after..

hugsss
M

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13 posted 2002-08-07 10:44 AM


This is just wonderful, I love the way you write, so warm and tender.

P.

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14 posted 2002-08-07 10:46 AM


Marsha,
The queen has waved her wand and sprayed her audience with the odor of fantasies adore.
Lovely write.

Kethry
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15 posted 2002-08-07 05:40 PM


Mushy,
what Seymour said...
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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16 posted 2002-08-08 11:12 AM


His name on her lips keeps him near
His voice the one that scatters the fear
Too far apart in time and space
Reduced to touching the screen in trace

After reading this tender beauty, I may steal your nickname! LOL For if this doesn't turn a heart to mush, that heart is made of stone... or has never heard even the whisper of love. *S*

This is beautiful, Marsha. *S*

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17 posted 2002-08-08 11:14 AM


nice
Diane Coway
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18 posted 2002-08-08 11:35 AM


Beautiful words.  I especially love the trust part.  Look forward to reading more of yours.
Coway

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19 posted 2002-08-08 11:58 AM



What everyone has said, and
a in understand...

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20 posted 2002-08-08 12:14 PM


"together"
One of the most important words in the King's English

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