Open Poetry #21 |
Voices Of Heart |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Voices Of Heart Her whispered yes makes his heart beat His reply of oh brings her to quick heat Softly her words carry him on Thrillingly she dives into his song The touch of her heart keeps him true The feel of his soul fills her all through He anchors her gives her a base She fills his life with her tender grace His voice covers her with delight Her voice caresses him in the night Two souls that connected as one Two hearts feeling joy under one sun His name on her lips keeps him near His voice the one that scatters the fear Too far apart in time and space Reduced to touching the screen in trace His voice makes the night feel so right Her voice illumes the sky and breathes light Wherever he is her voice is too In love with hope she says they’ll get through Her faith in his love lights her heart Her smile in his soul will n’er depart Their trust in love keeps them both warm Together they shelter from pains storm Marsha Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is a wonderfully warm and inspirational piece Marsha. Though distance may sometimes be far, it is amazing how the minds can connect. Beautifully captured. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy, darling heart, you have outdone yourself....exceptional poem dear heart. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marsha, this is incredibly beautiful! Outstanding write! Enjoyed so much by this reader. ~Hugs~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ I thought I heard heart-whispers in the forum~ 'Too far apart in time and space Reduced to touching the screen in trace' Oh sweetie .. I just love the tenderness of it~ You excel in the romantic writes dear heart~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love the voices you associate in your gorgeous poems, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marsha - their trust in love keeps them warm. How true, how true, sweet one... BC |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh Marsha...you mushy, mushy soul! Did you have to go and get me all misty now? And me here without a tissue! ~sniff~ How utterly beautiful, though beautiful seems a small definition of this exquisitely romantic ballad...dear lady, you have surpassed yourself with this one! Exceptional piece I just adore it! ((((hugs)))) |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh what a beautiful love poem, Marsha... Now I know why you are called "Mushy". This is so very romantic. ~ hugs from your chipmunk friend Lyra |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
His . . . Her . . . and finally their . . . so sentimentally touching, Maasha.... my gosh this good! Say Hi to the Mushettes for me! jeff |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
What Lyra said . . . Sweet romance! |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Oh Marsha, how very lovely and sweet, just wanna close my eyes and breathe slowly again... mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Their trust in love keeps them both warm Together they shelter from pains storm I love how you blend your thoughts..always lovely Marsha...leaving a warm feeling after.. hugsss M |
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Blue Kitty Member
since 2002-08-05
Posts 72Virginia |
This is just wonderful, I love the way you write, so warm and tender. P. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, The queen has waved her wand and sprayed her audience with the odor of fantasies adore. Lovely write. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mushy, what Seymour said... Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
His name on her lips keeps him near His voice the one that scatters the fear Too far apart in time and space Reduced to touching the screen in trace After reading this tender beauty, I may steal your nickname! LOL For if this doesn't turn a heart to mush, that heart is made of stone... or has never heard even the whisper of love. *S* This is beautiful, Marsha. *S* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Diane Coway Member
since 2002-08-01
Posts 61USA |
Beautiful words. I especially love the trust part. Look forward to reading more of yours. Coway |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What everyone has said, and a in understand... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
"together" One of the most important words in the King's English |
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