Open Poetry #21 |
Colored beach stones |
bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
This one purple as the sky surrounding steps of lightning falls. This one blue as sifted sand within the eye of desert stones. This one red as seasoned grapes that fall like pollen, honey sweet. This one black as treeline break that lets the sun rest her feet. This one gray as serene curtains left within a lonely room. This one orange as a flower upon a tree, bearing fruit. This one green as pebbled glass, held seaspecks, swimming there. And this one slow and brown as roots that nourish what is left to share. All these stones a part of me. Please don't throw them out to sea. "I fall into your arms." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
bsquirrel A good thoughtful write, enjoyed the read. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
A lovely pile of stones. Nice images. Sandra |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you, Seymour and Sandra. "I fall into your arms." [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (08-06-2002 06:41 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I love this Mikey... probably because I collect stones... Great imagery and use of color here. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
I like the black one best. Love you, baby. Fur ewig und immer, alles ist immer fur dich. So there. Is this what you wanted me to be? |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Stoner squirrel dude, Smooth as river pebbles. overworked, tired as hell, ~wranx (Zzzz) The shortest distance between two points... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BSquirrel~ Oh my ! This is replete with beauty of every hue~ I just love it~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love collecting rocks and gemstones too, it is amazing how they can come in so many different shades and sizes! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I really enjoyed this so much. I too collect rocks and have them from all over the world. In my mind, there is nothing better than touching and holding a piece of the earth that dates back to the beginning of time. Hugs, Marti |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I enjoyed this piece immensely, Mr.Squirrel. It relaxed me so much that I feel like I'm stoned for some reason. ~ stoned chipmunk hugs Lyra |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
An excellent write, I think all of us can find pieces of ourselves in this... Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you everyone! "I fall into your arms." |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
oops, missed this one. Very nice, very colorful. I like it :-) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mikey, I think you've portrayed a bigger picture than you know... quote: |
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Blue Kitty Member
since 2002-08-05
Posts 72Virginia |
I like collecting stone and shells too, used to put them in my fish tank, after a while I ran out of room for the fish. But I can remember where most of them came from and if I was with someone. Keep them stones, keep them memories. P. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I'm glad you all enjoyed these summer stones. I liked shapin' them for ya. "I fall into your arms." |
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