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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-08-06 04:33 PM

The sun’s not out, behind a cloud
Between the heavens and the earth
Seemingly wearing velvet shroud
Bearing a child in Heaven's birth.

The sky has cast a darkness here
as we watch in wait of a ray.
Not to cry or to ever fear
for yet again there will be day.

Where is the light that brightens me
and brings to my heart inner peace?
Where is the ball I wait to see
before the day has come to cease?

I shall wish upon all the stars
that shine the heavens ever bright.
From the cosmos and back to Mars,
in wait of this one guiding light.

This sun has rose a thousand times
and more to grace the earth's skin
I wish to say through all these rhymes
I am waiting, watching for then.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (08-06-2002 04:40 PM).]

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2002-08-06 04:35 PM

I can relate to this my fellow Carolinian, for the sun has yet to appear today. Very nice write, as always. You amaze me.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-08-06 05:28 PM

O'er the plains have I been cast
and burn the ground so white
and though the clouds now hinder me
t'ward you I'll cast some light

This is the time of summer sun
I'm wanted, and I'm not
soon winter shall chill the likes of all
and my warmth will be forgot

Soon I'll burn the clouds to fade
and merry shall all play
till the dark of night invades
and bids me go away

but on the morn, the red-streaked morn
I'll come again, I will
to cast shadows long and lean
and brighten your windowsill

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2002-08-06 06:05 PM

I'm waiting too, and watching.
Good one, Barry.
Sandra

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-08-06 08:25 PM

...FANTASTIC WRITE!!...

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2002-08-06 08:33 PM

Magnus~
Sounds like Noah hid the plans from you too~ ?

It was, however, bright and beautiful here today~
I'll see if I can direct the rays your way~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

6 posted 2002-08-06 08:38 PM

Magnus darling heart this is simply exquisite, truly awesome when you write lines as beautiful as this I’m kneeling at the feet of the master. In humble supplication that some of your gift will drop and I may gather it up.

I shall wish upon all the stars
that shine the heavens ever bright.
From the cosmos and back to Mars,
in wait of this one guiding light.

This sun has rose a thousand times
and more to grace the earth's skin
I wish to say through all these rhymes
I am waiting, watching for then.

You are one of the best there is, and this is so incredibly good. I look for your writing not just because it is good writing but it is always full of meaning, always relevant. Thank you my sweet friend for penning such a wonderful poem I love it utterly utterly utterly. I love your writing darling boy simply love it. This is simply perfect, well done darling heart well done

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-08-06 08:41 PM

(big huggsssssss) Oh Barry, this is sooooo touching, sweet friend, may you always find light in true loves beauty and rise to the sun to find that warmth ever glowing! (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

8 posted 2002-08-06 08:46 PM

Magnus, I am always in awe of the words you write and how you put them together in thought. Believe me friend, the sun is out, it's just temporarily behind the clouds. But the light is there for you.

Hugs, Marti

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