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vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2002-08-05 10:44 AM

When It was then
Into light
When darkness fades away
Quietly
It was then
All the flowers starts to bloom
Sun fits the sky
It was then
Winter's gone
When It was then
It was then
When love came
And It was then
It was then
When It was time
Who took all the love away
It was then
Then was In all
When It was then
It was then

[This message has been edited by vandana (08-05-2002 10:45 AM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-08-05 10:52 AM

Vandana, I know that English is not your first language, but I need to thank you for doing so well in expressing your poetry and sharing it with us. I always look forward to seeing how your thoughts whirl around in your mind, and you never let me down when you share with us...

thank you.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2002-08-05 10:58 AM

The poetry of longing needs no language...perfect!

I
I was standing
You were there
Two worlds collided...

INXS

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-08-05 10:58 AM

vandana
I second what Sunshine said.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2002-08-05 04:16 PM

you've gotten better with your work my friend. . . the words seem to come easier these days. . . that's a good thing. . .

keep growing. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-08-05 04:19 PM

vandana - I third what Sunshine said. Expressions came through...

BC

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-08-05 04:21 PM

Full of much feeling..
Enjoyed very much!
~Hugs~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-08-05 06:19 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Vandana, yes, it was then and I know as long as you believe in love it will be forever and summers sunshine will always warm your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-08-05 06:31 PM

I second, third and fourth what the others
have said.... Yes, it was then, wasn't it..

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2002-08-06 03:30 AM

beautiful! I don't know any other word.

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2002-08-06 08:29 PM

Wonderful to read you Vandana ... I enjoyed the flow you captured in this piece!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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