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Open Poetry #21

S.Cary Street Revisited

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-08-05 11:25 AM

Night comes creeping up cracked streets,
Traffic hums
And on steel plates give dull beats
In double measure of thumps,
Over runs
The trucks and cars cross the bumps
Of old passages through night,
Whisking by
Beneath the neon starlight,
Not looking in vacant eyes
That would cry
If tears were left them to try
On crack streets.

Gloom

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2002-08-05 12:02 PM

Hey, PG... You've done a great job of portraying the realities of our dark city streets, m'friend... It is indeed a sad state - Nice write..

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2002-08-05 12:28 PM

It's like reading photographs, I tell ya!

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