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When The Wind Blows
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When The Wind Blows |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“WHEN THE WIND BLOWS” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I feel the wind cool on my face, seems to come from everyplace… It blows away each and every tear, yet there’s another always there… They come, falling to the ground, disappear, never again to be found… Each one from inside, flowing for you, feels like a maelstrom, this brew… Romance is what you always wanted, it was given until I was addicted… But one can’t only be a taker, a return is needed, to the giver… When the wind blows once more, I’ll still be writing, as I did before… And it will take away one more tear, for this woman I still hold dear… ~~~~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, You did well, this is a lovely write. |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
A sad poem... but very well written! Neeraja |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You ARE an incurable romantic, m'friend...  |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
BC This one is your best one - there are many emotions expressed. Ariana |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Bill, it's good to read you again! This is beautiful in it's melancholy, especially the last stanza. Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh such sweet sadness, Bill...and written so very well.  ~ hugs and tearsLyra |
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Jason Member
since 2002-07-31
Posts 72Macon, GA |
Bill, I enjoyed this romantic dirge, thoroughly. This is the first one of your poems that I have come across, since my return, and it makes me want to search the archives for some more. I look forward to seeing more of your work. Thanks for the heartfelt words. Jason P.S. I, too, am a fan of the rhyme... Practiced in the Art of Perception |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's the letting go that's hardest. . . isn't it BC??? well done my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
When the wind blows once more, I’ll still be writing, as I did before… And it will take away one more tear, for this woman I still hold dear… ---------------------------------------- Very very nicely done my friend. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big huggsssssss) Oh Bill, this is so sadly beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I wish for love to always have you crying tears of joy and when the wind brushes one away, another happy one follows! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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