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Open Poetry #21

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bags123
Member

since 2002-06-06

Posts 128

0 posted 2002-08-05 04:53 PM

Cruel,.. lay the waves,
out upon the stoney sheath.
Battering with a cosmic force,
portending no
relief.

Cruel,.. drives the rain,
on the ships far out to sea.
Sailors dream of distant homes,
where lovers used
to be.

Cruel,.. are the storms,
which perplex the human heart.
Pounding in the selfish coves,
that keeps us both
apart.

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 2002-08-05 05:06 PM

this poem reminds me of my parents. it really does. it really does

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

2 posted 2002-08-05 05:54 PM

So very well done, bags...It brings back many fond memories of my sailing days with my first husband.

~ hugs from a sailing chipmunk

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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