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| Open Poetry #21 |
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Ode To the One I Love Who I Can't See |
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SweetSean18 Junior Member
since 2002-08-01
Posts 11California, U.S.A. |
She says she loves me so. Imagining what she must be really like. A soft sense of security waves towards me. Wishing only to see that one love which I can't see. Talking for an hour or more, I think. Walking towards her, she becomes an angel. With her brown hair and brown eyes. Sprinkling when she sees me. Tears of happiness arrive on her red cheeks. Not knowing what to say or do. Dancing and sharing information with tears in each eye. Before she came, I was walking alone. With a halo above us, we glitter with joy. Our faces light up like Christmas lights on a tree. Giving her this poem may make her love me more. Realizing that she is mine, I grasp her hand never letting go. My heart leaping and throbbing out of my chest. Her stunned beauty is nothing more than Snow White's. We have found each other and nothing else matters. I give this to you to show that I love you. Fire with water becomes one to have and to hold. Two angels fly off with love in their hearts. This is for the love I can't see, but I believe is for me. Thank you for visiting my poetry. |
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Savage Quiescence Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 326Wandering |
Aww, very sweet. In this line.. "With a halo above us, we glitter with joy." I love how you only described a single halo.. as if to strengthen the feeling of unity. Very lovely! ~Sky |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful sweet friend, I love it, this is beautiful and I believe with all my heart you will see your love soon before your very eyes! (big huggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sean, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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