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dancing naked in circular doorways
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dancing naked in circular doorways |
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desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx 
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it's time to dance naked in round doorways as music made from household pots and pans carries the romance of a summers eve to the depths of youth and innocense so long forgotten and thrown away speak the distance and candy the fruit that your surroundings leave behind broken dreams and moldy potatoes abound in this world of dual multiplicity and shadow recognition in a world of 3D glasses as you return to the world of kindergarten for recess and naptime, stories and free time things you never have as an adult just a few more things to add to the list of things that you wish you could have and you'll never understand the things you desire the wants and needs placed on you by childhood phantoms of your mind to create an illusion in the world you never knew as a kid because it was always beyond your reality where ignorance was blissful and sureal People demand freedom of speech to make up for the freedom of thought which they avoid. --Soren Kierkegaard |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
the thing is the dancing past and beyond the dorway, chalk illustrating the cartooned trip on sidewalks marked on both sides of a whip around the moon, satellites coming too soon, perhaps, though it all might seem elementary in the glow of kindergarten grafitti! but i am so completely sure that the allure of the TeachHer will endure the lesson that floating phantoms guessin' their futures might just suit her with a smile. and if you've never understood the things that you desire, understand the fan's command of remedy in fire! and if your wants have taunted jaunts of running to a dream, remember, friend, that life begins and ends at two extremes! One! the first, the burst of YES! Two! the second, second guessed! Three, the Free in search of Love to hold the glove which paints for the soft colored schemes of sidewalk dreams, two childhoods marked by true extremes of separated joined complete in tiles of street to meet the walk. Please come here and we will talk of all this mess. The best that i can guess is that the little girl is growing and the new one in a belly cannot wait to see your face. one day soon she'll spy the moon and show the grace of crystal. mystified, embraced, her eyes will know her dad's a PISTOL!! hehe |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
:::SmiLES::: Im thinking about dancing naked in circular doorways  The imagery was simple, though I think it will stay in my head for a long time; Enjoyed this ~RayneOne day Men will look back & say |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I would love to find one of the circular doorways, and the dancing would commence!!!! This brings out the child that we all learn to hide away...a great read!!! Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
broken dreams and moldy potatoes abound in this world of dual multiplicity and shadow recognition in a world of 3D glasses dancing naked in circular doorways! sounds like fun... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Enjoyed! Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Jason Member
since 2002-07-31
Posts 72Macon, GA |
Desperado, My friend, it has been far too long, since I have seen the eloquent dance you weave around meanings. It is a pleasure to see you are still as nimble as I remembered. Jason D. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Must be married life agrees with him, Jason...  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, it too can be so confusing but there are always wonders of looking back and I believe truly there are connections! (big huggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This sounds like lots of fun, Desperado... except for the moldy potatoe part... Now I must go find a circular doorway and show it to my husband.... preferably a private circular doorway... ~ circular chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
What a dance!!! Neeraja |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
For several reasons... I deem this a  [Don't you just want to Kit for her smilies?  ] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another go around for this one I think! |
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wordartist New Member
since 2002-08-06
Posts 6Bahrain |
Nice sense of imagery, but there are some parts that need a bit revising. All in all you have a very nice idea and you seem to illustrate it so skillfully through your lines poetry. |
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wordartist New Member
since 2002-08-06
Posts 6Bahrain |
Nice sense of imagery, but there are some parts that need a bit revising. All in all you have a very nice idea and you seem to illustrate it so skillfully through your lines poetry. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Loved it! Said if I only could ... |
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