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The Sea
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The Sea |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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The sea at dawn with all it's sounds the gulls cry out the ocean pounds the rocks stand steady against the waves mystery awaits in ocean caves. The life that fills and lives within in silence deep beneath the din as if muted by the waters flow such wondrous creatures down below. The sea and I kindred spirits the horizon line draws me near it. To see the end of the expanse of blue the ocean wonder what a view. WhiteRose Love Seduces Joy From The Heart |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes, well done! I love the sea and you wrote of it well  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful. I love the ocean. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
The sea and I kindred spirits the horizon line draws me near it. This is very beautifully penned, Anne... I think we are born with salt water in our blood.  ~ poetic hugsLyra |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I can certainly see the allure of ocean sprays and diving seagulls in this simple piece! Very well done! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
beautifully expressed and I have to agree I feel the affinity to the sea the ebb and flow ,inspires emotion I often go walking by the ocean Hope |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you all for your comments. I often said that even if I had to live in a tent, I'd be happy as long as it was near the sea. hmmmmmmm..now that I'm older, I'm not sure about the tent part. But I do so love the sea. |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
As Madame Chipmunk says, we do have the sea within us... well done! |
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Blue Kitty Member
since 2002-08-05
Posts 72Virginia |
Love this, another beach person, same ocean, further down the shore line. Same line on the horizon with ripple waves coming to the sand. P. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
The ocean is a wonderous mystery to behold. You have written well of her beauty! Deb |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Anne, this is a wonderfully invirgorating piece, sweet friend, you always portray romance so well in your words! (big hugggsssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we asll love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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