Open Poetry #21 |
Learning to let go.... |
skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
You're trying to keep it going Trying desperately to hang on to the past But even I can tell you That it is never going to last And I think that you know it too You just don't want to face it Letting go is the hardest thing in the world Because the pain, you just can't erase it Do you think that I don't know you? Your personality's the same as mine I know why you do the things you do Because I've done them, time after time I feel your pain I really do Though you've hurt me too, from all of your lies But I can tell that you aren't happy It's right there in your eyes. You are walking the road to destruction It'll take you straight into hell But it's all you can do to even walk that way Look at all the times you fell. Please find a different path to take And get off that road right away I know that it's going to be difficult But tomorrow is a bright new day Bringing with it a new strength And the courage to carry on Just remember to keep it with you When every other reason is gone. Take a deep breath and one last look back And then, just let everything go. It'll hurt at first but everything will be okay Trust me, on this one, I know. As always, Beth 8-4-02 You look inside my wild mind |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is so true and awesome! thanks for sharing this, and I needed it tonight. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Thank you passing shadows! I'm glad you liked it....just had to write it last night...thanks again. ~Beth You look inside my wild mind never knowing what you'll find still I want you all the time yeah I do 'cause you get me ~Michelle Branch [This message has been edited by skyshine (08-05-2002 11:51 AM).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . I'm sure that you do know. . . great work. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
skyshine - Your words, one of the most difficult things to do, to let go. YOu write it well... BC |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I do know, Sven.... Thanks Bill. This poem may need an explanation. It's about someone that I care about a lot, who is choosing to stay involved in a situation that is unable to work. I understand why he feels the way he does but I also know it is the wrong decision for him to make. He hasn't seen this yet, I'll show it to him when the time is right. Thanks again everyone! ~Beth You look inside my wild mind |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This reminds me of that U2 song "Stuck In A Moment You Can't Get Out Of" This is indeed a hard thing to do and my heart goes out to your friend believing he can, sweet friend, this is powerful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Beth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-05-2002 08:10 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you for this...almost slipped by me, but I'm glad I caught it...sending it back to the top |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm so glad this came back up... It is truly beautiful and straight from the heart. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
But tomorrow is a bright new day Bringing with it a new strength And the courage to carry on Just remember to keep it with you When every other reason is gone. Thank you so much for this Beth.... Its something I really needed to hear. ~ hugs from me....the garden pest Lyra |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Thank you Noah! I'll have to check out that song now. Thanks again, passing shadows. It did come straight from my heart, Nancy. Thank you for reading. You're welcome Lyra. I'm glad you liked it. from me Thanks again all, for your kindness! ~Beth You look inside my wild mind |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Take a deep breath and one last look back And then, just let everything go. Excellent advice. And you hang in there too, as a trustworthy friend. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Thank You Midnitesun, I'm hanging in there! --Beth Howl at the stars, whisper when you're sleeping, I'll be there to hold you, I'll be there to stop the chills and all the weeping. |
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