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Open Poetry #21

After the storm

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2002-08-04 10:23 PM

The seagulls flutter to the page
And screaming, eat the crumbs of words --
The hardened crusts of last night’s rage,
As thunder echoes their applause.

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

1 posted 2002-08-04 10:42 PM

I love this poem. It's really powerful.
I like the shorter ones the most.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-08-05 08:50 AM

Master~
Absolutely masterful~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

3 posted 2002-08-05 11:26 AM

A very strong poem!!!

Neeraja

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