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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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 I am here wishing to ride your amber waves Against a silhouetted moon canvas Come into the solitude of my night tapping the glass of splendor, -- drawing me into the landscape of your dreams, You drifted softly ashore footprints of my heart -- Each night I dream in realms of your gentle walk Weave me softly, completely in your fabric -- Thief of my night stirring the wind I will never be the same wishing upon stars dreaming The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (08-04-2002 09:43 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Weave me softly, completely in your fabric -- Thief of my night stirring the wind This is so very romantic and so beautifully written, Lauren...I love the beautiful picture with it also.  ~ poetic chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes Lauren....dreams...the weaving of the magic of love within them....taking us from each day into our night where once again...once more...we live in our dreams and smile as we sleep beneath a blanket of stars....and more... Beautiful write.....very nice... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, ooohhhhhh...the artwork is amazing, I LOVE IT, you always weave such gorgeous dreams from your rainbow heart, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light awlays shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lauren~Your writing is so intense and beautiful... Love this serene piece...just love it. ~Hugs~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Very enjoyable What beautiful images you weave here ============================================= drawing me into the landscape of your dreams, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I will never be the same wishing upon stars dreaming Damn, ya had to go and say that. I |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
first thought in my mind was teh song - one i love. i wasn't disappointed to find that the poem - though different and of a style its own - held true to the feeling i receive from the song. beautifully penned, as always, and i love the format... kind of dreamy and disjointed. peace C |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ You work absolute magic in your word-weaving~ 'Weave me softly, completely in your fabric -- *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - love your dream... BC |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Lauren - I find myself wishing, with fingers crossed and eyes shut tight ... for dreams like yours, the one's that fill each heart, each soul ... each night. Quite the seamtress you are ..... or is that "Dreamtress" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ever just want to get lost?? that's what I see here. . . lost in words. . . and in dreams. . . wonderful. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Lauren, you weave romance into everything you write in such a way that I've seen few others capable of doing. So very tenderly written. *hugs* |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So beautiful, Lauren. I am so glad you are feeling well enough to write these poems. I was so worried! Hug Sandra |
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JAR Junior Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 34 |
LittleL' weave soft and complete upon amber waves J' |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You drifted softly ashore footprints of my heart -- you yourself leave such gentle footprints across my heart dear friend.  Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
That is so true, some realizations just sort of sweep us away like that! It is wonderful to see you posting again! And very good to see you here! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is pure poetic magic! It's a keeper~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thief of night in rampant color... beautiful! |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Dream-oriented poems always get me... Very awesome. impress me, or be discarded |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You do pen in lace, I know I've said that before, but this "Thief of my night stirring the wind I will never be the same wishing upon stars dreaming" is so delicate and yet sure...Much enjoyed! |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
This is so lovely and tender. Very feminine. I liked the visual presentation as well. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Oh, Green-eyed lady, this is 1derful Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Thank you, I was indeed inspired to write this..... and what a lovely inspiration.... with warm regard Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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