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Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

0 posted 2002-08-07 08:58 PM

Winter's coat of leafless grey
On gentle days of white
Trammelled in to cloak the sun
And chill the quiet night

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-08-07 09:00 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Kristopher, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I love the autumn before the winter because of the smell of harvests and the nice comforting wind! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2002-08-07 09:00 PM

Nice work Kris.

Reminds me of my life, if I don't soon put in my firewood.

~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.

Bukowski

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2002-08-07 09:08 PM

This says lots Kris - you do so well with so few words - enjoyed it - Paul

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

4 posted 2002-08-08 06:31 PM

Kris, I love it. Another wonderful write.

Once again, an immensely enjoyed read.

Do you read often? How have you built up your vocabulary?

What does "Trammelled" mean, my good man? I'm curious.

Another question I had for you: what imspired your style in writing? I love it, as do many others. It's unique, and fresh. What fueled/fuels it?

Sincerely,
Titus

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2002-08-08 08:12 PM

Perfect short piece. You are so good with these.
Sandra

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-08-08 10:14 PM

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

7 posted 2002-08-08 10:22 PM

Chilling write that rings so true Kris...

miss these sassy shorts of yours (um...I meant the poems?) grins...

hugs you
Tanya

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Samantha G Kennedy
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 131
Kent England

8 posted 2002-08-09 07:00 AM

this is a beautiful write, proving much can be said in short

adorable

Sammie

^i^

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-08-09 08:02 AM

...FANTASTIC!!...

cjohnson/poet2079
Junior Member

since 2002-07-31

Posts 35
va(757)

10 posted 2002-08-12 11:30 AM

Kris, short is good; your words create a lovely scene; I love it! ...a nocturnal journey of life, silently stilled,
until, the dawn of light...

eyssence

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