Open Poetry #21 |
Thirst And Willow |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Fervent are the willows, bowed reverent in sacred rain Flowing arms in elegance, withdrawn in shy refrain How well the riverbanks provide in thirsty cloudless spells To wait the thunder rolls that pour libation to full wells Frequently the searching roots will seek a liquid source In hidden, seeking brevity where once the rivers course How soon to saturated, in crystal flows the bloodline clear To wait the thunder rolls in bring of drink and shower near Fair and upturned greenery of unkempt vinery locks In quiet fortitude to bend the storms of after shocks How soon these regal plantings grow so strongly sensitive To wait the thunder rolls and water wholes all relative Copyright Kkh 8/2/02 |
||
© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved | |||
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is wonderful. Sandra |
||
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
So....tell me this....do you have a magic chant you do with your rain dances...??? If not...me thinks you need to... Praying for rain.... Beautiful poem Kathy.... |
||
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some play on words that make oh so much sense... thank you for this one! |
||
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - one of my favorite trees is the willow. Why, I'm not sure. Just peaceful they are, as they stand by the river. Very nice write... BC |
||
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ThisDiamond Such a way with words you have! The flow and the know...well done! |
||
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ahhh, you guys! You certainly know how to leave a smile in a warm breeze. Thanks. ThisDiamond |
||
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond Very nice write, enjoyed the read. |
||
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you for bringing me the images of the willow beside the 'stream.' I love willows and have seen them draped over rivers, lakes and ponds. Lovely to get to see them in my mind's eye again by your vivid use of words. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
||
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, willows are always so pretty to me and enchanting when raindrops fall down their leaves! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |