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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-08-02 10:15 AM



I've watched her now
it's been ten years,
I've seen her laugh
and dried her tears.

I've held her when
she was afraid,
I've calmed her when
she got irate.

She has my eyes
my blonde hair too,
she has Dad's temper
what can you do?

But she's my little angel
I love her more each day.
I'm thankful for this gift
the good Lord sent my way.

WhiteRose

Love seduces joy from the heart

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-08-02 12:35 PM


This is so sweet.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Paul Wilson
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2 posted 2002-08-03 03:02 AM


Really Cute & Sweet.
A beautiful flower nurtured by you.
A gift from God, This is so true.

secretlife
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since 2002-07-30
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3 posted 2002-08-03 07:31 AM


Its a very soft words meaning..I like it..
So nice feelings...

Good job,,good luck.

Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2002-08-03 11:37 AM


WhiteRose~
I know that if the reader could feel the love .... your little angel can feel it too~
Precious write~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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5 posted 2002-08-03 01:52 PM


I love this poem!!  It is so sweet!!!  smiles... I have a daughter too...

Neeraja

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6 posted 2002-08-03 01:54 PM


superbly woven, your mother's heart is showing, as well as your talent

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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