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*Lil*Blu*Eyez*
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since 2002-08-01
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0 posted 2002-08-02 10:31 AM


Do You?

Do you know what happens,
When a friend,
Of the very bestm
lies to you?

Do you know how it feels,
to have the one you used to love,
To have the one that used to care,
Take your heart and smash it everywhere?

Do you know what to do,
When your best friend,
Has taken all your feelings,
and forgotten about them?

Well I know how it feels,
To have a best friend,
That has taken my life,
And broken it to pieces,
So if you have a best friend,
That really loves you and cares,
Then dont let that best friend hurt you,
and if they do,
then dont let them ruin you life,
Like mine ruined mine.


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*Sweet*n*sexy*0803*
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since 2002-08-01
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1 posted 2002-08-02 11:11 AM


Hey Hailey...that's a great poem!
Krishankins
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since 2002-06-23
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2 posted 2002-08-02 11:54 AM


I feel your pain. I had the same thing happen.
Wonderful write!



Kris

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

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