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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-08-01 09:58 PM


They Say

They say that love is a wonderful thing
But, this isn't something that I know
There was a time he said he loved me
Love I didn't think was suppose to hurt me so

I tried to give him all of the love I had inside
It seems he always just kept pushing me away
Nothing I ever tried to do was good enough
And, there wasn't anything I could ever say

It seems like love always causes so much pain
To be loved I do not think I want anymore
It never seems to last very long at all
I will never again to my heart open up the door

By Sue 8-1-02




© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2002-08-01 10:03 PM


Sue, sadly...it can sometimes be very
difficult to find a mate that will love
without condition,  unwavering in their
commitment to the one person they are
supposed to be devoted to....

If nothing else...try to love yourself as
the good person you are...

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-08-01 10:15 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, I understand how you feel, some people can be so cruel and unfair but know deep down you are loved by many and while it helps to take a small rest from trying, that there is one true love out there for you! (sigh) Until then, continue to believe in your own heart, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-08-01 10:19 PM


Ah Sue...write it out sweetie...
And above all, love yourself first.
~Hugs~

the_loner_23
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4 posted 2002-08-01 10:36 PM


Very very sad

Cold hands means a warm heart

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-08-01 10:42 PM


SmartChick
You said it well, yet I feel there is always someone out there.

Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-08-02 12:01 PM


Write your angst out, Sue...but please don't close your heart...
When one door closes, another one opens, and you will never know who is standing on the other side of it...
so don't close your heart.
~ hugs from the heart

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Samantha G Kennedy
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7 posted 2002-08-02 03:58 AM


......sometimes love seems to hurt ~ and yet, it should not


a great write, one that left me thinking

Sammie

^i^

catalinamoon
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8 posted 2002-08-02 11:24 AM


Dear Sue, love should not hurt. I have experienced that it usually does. But I know there is that one time, when it will not, that will be right.
Hugs
Sandra

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2002-08-02 11:48 AM


SmartChick - Love at times does hurt, but that's love. I'm sorry for your hurting, as I understand where you are and have been. Best to you Sue. Smile, cause I'm looking at you...

BC

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