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*Sweet*n*sexy*0803*
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0 posted 2002-08-01 04:38 PM


Everlasting Love

You are my angel
Heaven-sent
Everytime I see you
It's a moment well spent.

No matter what happens
I'll always be here
Comforting you,
And holding you near.

You help me out
In the worst of times
You always seem to
Open my mind.

You lift me up
Into skies unknown
When I'm with you
A new world is shown.

I never knew
Life could feel so great,
You bring out my best qualities
And melt away all the hate.

I don't think I could ever explain
The way you make me feel.
You always are so perfect,
At times it seems unreal.

But you mean so much to me,
I'll never give you up
I want you and me to have
An everlasting love.

© Copyright 2002 *Sweet*n*sexy*0803* - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-08-01 04:41 PM



"You lift me up
Into skies unknown
When I'm with you
A new world is shown."




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is such a beautiful and romantic debut, sweet friend, I just know your love will cherish this and forever promise you this everlasting love, this is gorgeous, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspiired hy all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend we all love you so much, also, be sure to check your E-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-01-2002 04:42 PM).]

WhiteRose
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2 posted 2002-08-01 04:41 PM


Welcome to Passions. A very sweet poem. :-)
the_loner_23
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3 posted 2002-08-01 04:50 PM


This is so sweet

Cold hands means a warm heart

CSKpoet
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4 posted 2002-08-01 04:57 PM


WELCOME!! charming and sweet poem...
aloha, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

*Sweet*n*sexy*0803*
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5 posted 2002-08-01 04:58 PM


Thank you everyone. =)
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-08-01 05:49 PM


*Sweet*n*sexy*0803*
Very nice, enjoyed the read.

LilTai
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7 posted 2002-08-01 06:53 PM


What a perfect love poem It expresses such deep and strong emotions in such a sweet way. I enjoyed it very much!
And welcome to Passions

   Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

Magnus
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8 posted 2002-08-01 06:55 PM


With a poem like this....I don't think you
have a thing to worry about...

Welcome to Passions,  enjoy yourself...

Enchantress
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9 posted 2002-08-01 07:40 PM


Welcome to Passions!
Very nice first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work..
Relax, make yourself at home,
read and sign other memebers posts..
AND most of all ENJOY!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine
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10 posted 2002-08-01 07:50 PM



Welcome to Passions, little one.  I think you're going to like it here...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


SweetSean18
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11 posted 2002-08-01 09:52 PM


That poem hit home for me. That's a very very sweet poem. Beautiful. I am so glad that you wrote that. It's very good. It's very encouraging. Good imagery and description.
Paul Wilson
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12 posted 2002-08-02 03:46 AM


Each moment we spend with the one we love is so wonderful. Memories that time can never erase. Very Nice... Paul
Corinne
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13 posted 2002-08-02 11:21 AM


Plain and simple, sweetly written!

Cor

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