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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-08-02 08:10 AM

Those fine hairs
Low on the nape of your neck,
Stiff standing
And demanding,
You rub them to lay back down,
Perchancing
A glancing,
What is there that you suspect?
Was it there,
Any where,
Or was it just a strange sound,
A brief scare
Of death come passing around..

Gloom

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

1 posted 2002-08-02 08:12 AM

Good write Gloom....Death, you will know me by my touch....it will be your last!

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2002-08-02 08:21 AM

Thank you, Toerag,
Pleased you liked it,
I don’t have the lightness of your writing,
I just write about what I know.

Gloom

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

3 posted 2002-08-02 10:55 AM

Gloomy alright. :-) But a nice read anyway. I'm looking over my shoulder now.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2002-08-06 08:01 PM

I must have overlooked this one..maybe was too hair raising at the time..*s
You do know how to write the gloom...
hugs
M

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-08-06 09:11 PM

Wow, I just love the haunting tone of your words, sweet friend, this is wonderful and stirs with intensity, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

sigheyes
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 323
the winds of destiny

6 posted 2002-08-06 09:43 PM

Your words live up to your name.

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

7 posted 2002-08-06 11:33 PM

You inspire, Gloom.
I've felt that chill breeze . . .

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

8 posted 2002-08-07 07:38 AM

or life...tickling you on...helen

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2002-08-07 08:25 AM

Professor Gloom
You have captured the silence of aware.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2002-08-08 10:43 AM

And you've left those fine hairs standing at attention... thanks a lot! LOL

I like this, Professor! *S*

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2002-08-08 10:45 AM

Sometimes people just like
to dance on the grave
of what's to come...

well done, Sir...

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

12 posted 2002-08-08 11:24 AM

You have some Gloomy talent, Professor..

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