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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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night is a sheet of black metal with sprinkles of glitter and star shaped strikes from the hammer moon night is cold like the glass on a winter window when it sticks to the skin like a warm eraser night is a coat, no buttons on it drenching wet, with built in wind the never dry kind night is a bottle, empty hollow vapors burned for light when the blind man searched for love night is a rider on iron horse clatter of steel on tin roads and metal buildings reflecting sounds the deaf play drums when night pounds ©Dark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-02-2002 06:05 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Have you been out riding that lil black *beauty* in the heat of the night again buddie? Well hey if you were, I sure didn't here her roaring into the drive to pick me up darn it.  Just teasing babe, Loved the write. GOOD Morning from across the country, yep thats me the little dot you see waving way over here. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. {on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-02-2002 06:40 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
hi donna.........I see that dot, wanna play hookie today and do some wind stuff? thanks babe for the wave. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sure wish that I could do that wind stuff with ya....heheh.....hey, the boss is off today, could probably manage to skip a few hours......oh darn.... I got work to do.....but would ride the wind with you any day sweets. hi ho hi ho.... it's off to work I go. Have a good one Dark. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. {on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-02-2002 06:54 AM).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
The night sleeps silent behind curtain eyes while the strum shore beats out new thoughts leaking from sandman's pocket We never want to hum them out loud but scream them into lights I know this write..brilliant descriptions Dark. Long nights. Morning hugs.. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Regina; thanks babe, I like your view of it too.....heck we will just do the hugs and let the night figure it out for himself |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Dark! This reminded of me how much I love the night. Enjoyed. ~Morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
night is speechless in its awe some wind of thought |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger A Picaso in words. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS night is cotton fog stuffing corners and cracks with muted train whistles. Love this poem! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enchantress..........thanks to you , and big hugs to you (at night) (wink). ms sunshine, good morning again ms midwestern gracious...thanks to you . humble jumble of thanks and grinz sir, thanks sy. ms martie, you see night as metal and fog too? darn, you drank some puddinstone water too huh? (he he) thanks lady, hugs to you. [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-02-2002 10:43 AM).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Night is the time for lovers. like this Mr. Dark. Cor |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Cor, thanks ms, always enjoy your waves...and smiles. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  WOW!!! Oh my gosh, I love this vision, sweet friend, though I don't necessarily believe in horoscopes I am admired by the stories told in the stars and I too always imagine Orion hunting in the night in a black cape, sweet friend, this is an excellent portrayal of eve, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Dang, DS this is beyond cool, I love the way you give life it's own pizazz. Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
"the deaf play drums when night pounds"\yeah i'd like to turn the volume off and get to sleep when night is so rude... loved the wonderful imagry in this...will think on this instead of counting the cracks in the drywall.. your writing always is such a joy to read and ponder...you posess a very interesting mind, DM! hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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