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Samantha G Kennedy
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 131
Kent England

0 posted 2002-08-01 07:12 PM

I scrutinize the day fall in,
One enormous overlap of sky, from dark to light-
Each angle of my stare takes in the last echo of sweet air
My nostrils eat eagerly the shadows of you.

¤

I tow the blazing quarters of my psyche
To be placed in silenced reflections of the world,
Beckoning the violet searing sensations
That shakes the rhythm of my movements flow;

¤

My inner sanctum liquefies the silver sands I walk
Each step of affection delivering my dance,
And my mind whirls into another dimension of existence
Pausing by still waters clarifying ecstasy;

¤

This playground built from cavities of fears
Run parallel the ragged memoirs dormant~ furthermore
They empty to the two faced moon and spin
The higher self of I, shifts the story to move on;

¤

I can’t look back, the words broke the pattern
Confronting sacks of tissue to pierce a heart,
But I saw the soul’s vague longing
At least for just a moment I was strong;

¤

I’ll raise the basic negative, unconsciously-
To scale the higher visions of truth,
Kissing a forehead goodbye, while shades music
Chants within your dreams perpetually,
my gift to you, a single scar across my heart.

S-G-K©

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-08-01 07:15 PM

Awesome

Cold hands means a warm heart

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-08-01 07:16 PM

Samantha, a lot of deep thoughts within ..
well conceived....

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-08-01 07:36 PM

Samantha,
I am impressed. Perhaps because of your style and ability but mostly but the flow of your mind.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-08-01 09:35 PM

(smiles) Yes, yes, we must always treat lifes journies like an onion; we must always learn from our mistakes and continue to shed the skin like a snake until we finally get as close as the truth as we can get where ecstasy and justice rest! (kiss on cheek) This is awesome, sweet sister butterfly, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sam, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2002-08-02 12:16 PM

My inner sanctum liquefies the silver sands I walk
Each step of affection delivering my dance,
And my mind whirls into another dimension of existence
Pausing by still waters clarifying ecstasy;

This is excellence in verse, Samantha...
Please keep up the good work.

~ chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Samantha G Kennedy
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 131
Kent England

6 posted 2002-08-02 03:51 AM

Thank you!! so very much

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-08-02 11:25 AM

Samantha, this is quite intense. You used some very good lines here.
Sandra

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

8 posted 2002-08-02 09:13 PM

Samantha, I too am impressed by this piece, you have some hard-hitting and unique lines here and I feel your words. I look forward to more poetry by you

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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