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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-08-02 01:11 PM





meandering mists
dreams...as clouds in my coffee
coloring my soul

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-08-02 01:16 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

OLIAS
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2 posted 2002-08-02 02:11 PM


Great haiku it has it all, coffee and dreams Thanks for sharing.

Regards,
Olias.

VAS
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3 posted 2002-08-02 02:35 PM


superb, to the max!
gloriously woven friend
you've a gorgeous soul

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Magnus
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4 posted 2002-08-02 02:54 PM


Nicely done with all the right ingredients,
sugar?...two spoons...please...

Samantha G Kennedy
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5 posted 2002-08-02 03:01 PM


Wonderful Haiku!


Sammie

^i^

Sven
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6 posted 2002-08-02 03:23 PM


only you would have clouds in your coffee. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Neeraja
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7 posted 2002-08-02 03:29 PM


I love haiku's... I love coffee... so what more do I need.... eeh.... well...



Neeraja

Keith Morgan
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Md
8 posted 2002-08-02 03:32 PM


great Haiku!!!!!!

Write from the soul and the words will flow

CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
9 posted 2002-08-02 08:59 PM


Loner: thanks you are so kind

Olias: thanks much for the kind comments

Vas: I know that I am..uhhh different alright..smiles...thanks for your creative comment

Magnus: okay sugar it is and I brought calorie free donuts...hehe...we can dream can'tr we? thanks so much!

Samantha: smiles and big thanks!

Sven: no I have clouds over my house as well..smiles..this was an early morning thought, now wasn't it?...thanks for taking time on this to comment....I am so glad to see you again!

Neeraja:you just need to grab a donut and contemplate...smiles,,,thanks for your lovely comment

Keith: thanks so much..I bet it is hot in Arizona..I need to do an iced tea one for you ..

aloha and   to all
Cher


Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

[This message has been edited by CSKpoet (08-02-2002 09:00 PM).]

Honeybee
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10 posted 2002-08-02 09:32 PM



I really like your use of images, I'm keeping this one

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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