Open Poetry #21 |
Don't move |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Don't move let this moment dwell in the urgency of desire where the senses merge Let our bodies be still and feel me deep within Feeding this satisfaction that loving brings And one last kiss will set us in an explosive rhythm of love of this too urgent love [This message has been edited by walker (07-27-2002 09:10 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, may this special moment always burn brightly in your heart and may love always bring a light to your heart, sweet friend, this is soooooo beautiful, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing! May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow! Walker....I can almost hear the heavy breathing of the urgency of the moment within this poem.... |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Sounds like some nice hot romance.Nice job! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Great to read ya, again walker! You still do what you do...so well! Sig strike in process...grab a sign and let's walk around in circles. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
intense and pasionate nice little work If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
This one needs a bump. I like it! |
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