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walker
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0 posted 2002-07-27 09:08 PM



Don't move
let this moment dwell
in the urgency of desire
where the senses merge
Let our bodies be still
and feel me deep within
Feeding this satisfaction
that loving brings
And one last kiss
will set us
in an explosive rhythm of love
of this too urgent love

[This message has been edited by walker (07-27-2002 09:10 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-07-27 09:33 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, may this special moment always burn brightly in your heart and may love always bring a light to your heart, sweet friend, this is soooooo beautiful, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 2002-07-27 11:26 PM


Wow!  Walker....I can almost hear the heavy
breathing of the urgency of the moment
within this poem....

sodpossom
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3 posted 2002-07-27 11:29 PM


Sounds like some nice hot romance.Nice job!
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4 posted 2002-07-28 12:57 PM


Great to read ya, again walker!  You still do what you do...so well!

Sig strike in process...grab a sign and let's walk around in circles.

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5 posted 2002-07-28 01:03 AM


intense and pasionate nice little work

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6 posted 2002-08-02 12:05 PM


This one needs a bump. I like it!
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