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Open Poetry #21

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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-08-01 09:21 PM

Sitting in a dim, dark room
Thinking of all the things that have gone wrong
Then I think to myself
I can't give up
I am in it for the long haul

Cold hands means a warm heart

LilTai
Member

since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

1 posted 2002-08-01 09:36 PM

Exactly. This is perfect-- NEVER give up hope

No matter what happens...the good times will always come again. You have a lot of courage and a great will to go on...great poem. I enjoyed it very much.

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

2 posted 2002-08-02 12:57 PM

If only I had found my angel sooner...

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

baerlon
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA

3 posted 2002-08-02 04:33 AM

I sometimes get like this. I hope you can keep it up and stay with whatever it is.

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

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