Forest Of Nowhere ( a duet with Catalinamoon)

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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2002-07-30 10:36 AM

They walked in deep and deeper yet
through trees of life that blocked the light
a path to nowhere
only tears
to make their melancholy plight

Tangled limbs and unsecured roots
hollowed and bent by the lifeless dark
feeding
upon their misfortunes
that remain faced within the bark

So mystified were they by such
that clouds obscured their very thoughts
no answers
to persistent why's
it felt like love was all for naught

Such emptiness within the Wood
where hearts are swallowed by its void
the struggle
is misunderstood
and their souls are slowly destroyed

So dim, yet rays of light shine through
and hope a dream they can't let go
fingertips touch
and hands are clasped
Forest can not conceal love's glow

These hearts shine with lost rays of hope
remembering times of before ...
trapped and bound
now able to cope
clearing a path distinct and sure

(from the forest of Sandra and Craig)
*s

create an addiction .... share a smile!!

[This message has been edited by ctowen (07-30-2002 10:38 AM).]

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-07-30 01:20 PM

So dim, yet rays of light shine through
and hope a dream they can't let go
fingertips touch
and hands are clasped
Forest can not conceal love's glow

These hearts shine with lost rays of hope
remembering times of before ...
trapped and bound
now able to cope
clearing a path distinct and sure

Damn good job on this! Glad the forest cleared a bit there at the end. Truly impressive write!

Sig strike in process...grab a sign and let's walk around in circles.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-07-30 01:45 PM

Wonderfully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-07-30 01:45 PM

Sandra & Craig!!
I stand and applaud the two of you
on a wonderfully penned duet!
Extremely well done and much enjoyed by this reader!
~Hugs to you both~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2002-07-30 04:24 PM

to see the forest for the trees???

one hopes that you've got a good compass. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-07-30 05:18 PM

Craig and Sandra, exceptionally well done.
Love the message...great job...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-07-30 05:29 PM

(smiles) Yes, yes, loves light can pierce any forest and hover above any mountain and true love is bound to always find both your ways, sweet friends, this is a beautifully quilled debut, I LOVE IT, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiufl hearts, sweet Craig and Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-30-2002 05:29 PM).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-07-30 09:32 PM

Hi Craig, thanks for writing this with me, & posting this. We do look kinda good together in print, I think

Sandra

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

8 posted 2002-08-01 12:06 PM

Oh YES YES...I also think the two of you look wonderful in print!! I loved this, Sandra and Craig....hopefully this is just an appetizer, 'cause I want MORE!!!!!

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2002-08-02 12:04 PM

wonderful you two....there will be more? I can only hope.....

HUGSSSSS

Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2002-08-02 06:16 AM

Incredible write you two, and I hope we are blessed with a second one also. Very well done. Hugs to you both!

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

11 posted 2002-08-02 12:58 PM

(from the forests of my mind)

Said if I only could ...
-KB

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