Open Poetry #21 |
The Rain Coming Down |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
The rain coming down making the trees quiver while pressed upon by heaven makes my body kind of shiver, as they fight to stay upright as the branches rally strength makes me think of friends who with style and with grace have helped me stand tall when the rains came pouring down thanks dear friends, you're so nice to have around. WhiteRose 06/01 [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-01-2002 06:14 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
Aw, this is a beautiful poem and tribute to your friends The imagery and feeling it leaves you with after reading..I dunno how to describe it..I love this poem Thanks for the very enjoyable read! Tai |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The beauty of friendship....and someone to hold the umbrella when the rains come down. Nice Poem.... |
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