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*Sweet*n*sexy*0803*
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since 2002-08-01
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0 posted 2002-08-01 04:51 PM



Please

Please don't hurt her.
Don't you see?
Please don't hurt her.
She's very dear to me.

Please take back
Those things you said.
Won't you please try
To make some amends?

Please will you promise
Not to make her cry?
And if you can't promise,
At least say you'll try.

Please will take it out
On me instead?
I'll take the pain for her,
Don't bring sad thoughts to her head.

Please will you do this?
Please, if you can.
I'd do anything for
My very best friend.

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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2002-08-01 04:52 PM


Your friend is blessed to have a friend such as you.
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-08-01 05:01 PM




(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, your friend is so lucky to have a caring friend like you, this is a touching compassionate poem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-01-2002 05:02 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-08-01 05:07 PM


Very good write

Cold hands means a warm heart

LilTai
Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189
United States
4 posted 2002-08-01 06:55 PM


What a caring friend you are..She is so lucky to have you!
Nice poem I like the message in it.

   Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

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