Tracing the Tracks of my Tears

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Open Poetry #21

Tracing the Tracks of my Tears

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-08-01 05:59 PM

Evernight I sit in my room
Wondering if I ever will find someone
Sometimes I look in my bathroom mirror
To waste time
Tracing the tracks of my tears

Cold hands means a warm heart

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2002-08-01 06:01 PM

Not necessarily a waste of time. There is someone out there just waiting for you. Sounds cliche, but it's true.

*HuGs*

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

2 posted 2002-08-01 06:22 PM

She has someone... right here.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

LilTai
Member

since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

3 posted 2002-08-01 06:49 PM

I like this poem a lot..your poetry is dramatically improving with each post-I love it! The title (and last line) are amazing. I love this new style you've been developing! Keep it up

I feel SO incredibly rude for asking, please forgive me...Don't you have a boyfriend? Sorry if I'm bringing up a sore subject, but...what happened? If you need anyone to talk to, I'm here for ya sweetie

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

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