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Last Night
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Last Night |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Last Night I heard the sound of echoes cast A misty round of long gone past Searching out the hollow spheres Whispering whispers in my ears Sending clouds to act as rune. Graving out the hours noon Shading all the flowers frill Lending tremors cold of chill The echoes echoed memories had The good, faded and some of sad But all hung over the abyss Where lies the hooded angels kiss. And there in pucker waits the groom The silence of the finished loom A shroud that wraps around the light And brings the final sleep of night. Where once again the shuttle cock Will race across new threads in lock. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 I think I see the him that was this man whose thoughts give us all pause he weaves a wend and then again he spells his cast for us to bend and wanton, we, who come to see the magic of his mystery |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And, a beautiful 'Good Morning' to you too Sy! Thank you for the lovely morning read, love. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And there in pucker waits the groom ====================================  (well we couldnt just leave him hanging in mid pucker now could we?)   |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This certainly was a lovely morning read. Thank you. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Quite fine, and those last two lines...great wind-up! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I am moved by the language... the choice of words... I love this poem!!! Neeraja |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you sweet.  Enchantress, Love and hugs back. JM, And there in pucker waits the groom On rainbows path of finished loom. WWRS White Rose, Thank you and your welcome. Vandana, Thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS, Thank you dear. Neeraja, Glad you enjoyed and thank you. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sir sy, your art is glow dots worthy and after thought provoking enjoyed it |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Always enjoy your comments. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It must have been that hot fudge sundae before bed, Sy  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles over Balladeer's comment) Yep, now just some raspberry tea is all you need to help you get to sleep! (big hugggssssss) This is a beautiful afternoon read, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I will always be in awe of your talent Sir. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy You are unending poetry superb...and I enjoy each and every word! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, No it was the hot dogs and sauerkraut. Noal, Thank you for the read and reply. Sven, As I am of yours. Martie, |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
with a bent finger, crooked he beckons with a smile allure invade my dreams, spread thin and sweet converge on avenues, there we'll meet Dreams Sleep and the bat of night who walks when others shut out the light jeff love the style and wording of your thoughts, Sey. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Seymour, let me catch, there now. Absolutely marvelous! and the rhythm and flow of your words makes for a great write. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hot Fudge???...sounds good to me.....Let's go!....Wait, that was 'Deer talking about that.... Forget the hot fudge Sy, you have to watch your waistline..... Thanx for another enchanting write...as only you can do.... |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
...hmmm, a great read! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ShadowRider Love your comment. Gemini, Thank you friend. Mangus, That fudge gets me ever time. LOL Mycafe, A nice comment. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sy~ You are just wonderful with words.... always a pleasure to read... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A shroud that wraps around the light And brings the final sleep of night. What beautiful words, Sy... not just these...the whole poem.  ~ poetic hugsLyra |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
Sending clouds to act as rune. Graving out the hours noon Shading all the flowers frill Lending tremors cold of chill utterly beautiful!!! each stanza flowing perfectly! Sammie ^i^ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lauren, Thank you my dear, Lyra, Love and hugs back. Samantha, Thank you dear. |
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