Sun, Moon, Stars of Night (NO E's challenge)

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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-07-31 08:56 PM

Sun, moon, stars of a night
guiding us along a path
lifting souls from a blight
saving us from His wrath

Giving thought to bathing moon
upon grass soft and firm
sound a call of a loon
loving arms strong and warm

Lips to kiss as ticks go by
in wait of passion’s flow
lost to a soulful sigh
which only two will know

Dancing to a lyric soft
as cotton to a touch
Lying still in a loft
in want of oh so much

A word without a curl
that stay 'hind a "D"
I'll try it in a whirl
So Sv'n can laugh you "C"!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-07-31 08:58 PM

Smart, Savvy & Witty!
Back to Thy Top!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-07-31 09:04 PM

(smiles) YAY!!! Oh, say can you s'ync? (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, you have certainly mastered this true challenge, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2002-07-31 09:08 PM

Magnus darling boy what a winning way to post the challenge. This is wonderful. There is within your writing such strength and heart, I’m always awed by the way you compose your thoughts in this poem especially you’ve written them perfectly. The flow is superb the light touch of your spirit is in this perfect and I’m stunned wonderful wonderful writing. I love it utterly utterly utterly. Such beauty in your soul darling man

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-07-31 10:03 PM

Excellent...challenge well met.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2002-07-31 11:37 PM

OMGOSH that is totally AMAZING wow, Id be lost with out E....LOL beautiful Barry~

Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2002-08-01 04:46 PM

brilliant!! just brilliant Sir. . .

this is just what I was going for. . . good job. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-08-01 07:09 PM

You did this well. It's a good poem, hard to do with no E..

Sandra

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

8 posted 2002-08-01 08:12 PM

Wow (no eee's)
Groovy (no eee's)
C how this works?
Funn (no eee's)

Barry, too good of a job
now!
go buy a vow*l! hehehe
jeff

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2002-08-01 08:25 PM

Barry

Don't even want to try this..you did a great job..and LOL at Jeff's reply.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2002-08-01 08:49 PM

enjoy

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

11 posted 2002-08-01 10:30 PM

Fabulous job. This is impossibly hard and you did it! I can't do this. I totally throw up my hands in frustration. Too bad this didn't rhymm. ;-) Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns,
I still embrace it, for I know
that in between those thorns,
there is a rose worth all the pain."

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

12 posted 2002-08-01 11:06 PM

This is excellent! *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

mycafe
Senior Member

since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

13 posted 2002-08-01 11:18 PM

Whoa... I will give you even toes up if I could do this, Magnus

. Excellent!!

Keep counting your blessings

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

14 posted 2002-08-01 11:50 PM

A word without a curl
that stay 'hind a "D"
I'll try it in a whirl
So Sv'n can laugh you "C"!

Wow!!!!!! Thats great work, Barry!

~ hugs with no E

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Samantha G Kennedy
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 131
Kent England

15 posted 2002-08-02 04:41 AM

not an easy challenge!! but wow, you did it perfectly

great read

Sammie

^i^

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

16 posted 2002-08-02 08:54 AM

no E's but absolutely brilliant~
Well done sir!

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

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