Open Poetry #21 |
Final Test |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Final Test What if love was not enough? What if there were lots of other things to factor in? Things like money and age differences and the opinions of family and friends. Will each external factor be weighed and put to rest? Will the heart stand the pressure of loves final test? JamesLee July29 2002 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love is never enough...I think someone wrote a book on that...I happen to agree (for the moment anyway) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love your poem, James. But I think the true test of love? is that it knows "no finals"... smile? now. I gotta go put on a frigging tiarra... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful James...and I do think a lot of factors are involved... but true love withstands all. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I think "true love" is enough. The problem is defining "true love" Enjoyed the poem. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) There are indeed many obstacles that love is challenged with, but as long as love is true, nothing can stop its magic and warmth! (big hugggssssss) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
I like this..of course in any relationship there are all those other factors, but if the love is real and true, then it is always enough Tai |
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