Open Poetry #21 |
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Angel Mist Love |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
In the gentleness of a drizzle Your spirit moved into me Surrounding me in a morning mist Where the soft pedals of dew Opens into blossoms of aromatic magnetism In a peek a boo attitude The rays of your heart Warmed the very core of my existence In a blanket of caresses that sent shivers Quaking into the morning sun As the songbirds of love Send in their special melody Captivating me within a special charisma Of my excited emotions Needing your heart next to mine Where the merging water beads Which lubricate our needs into a lotion That friction steams In a rainbow that said it all Paradise exhilarated in tumultuous arousals Catapulting me into the heavens On the banks of eternity In eyes now misting Needing you closer than forever Yes my angel Your wings have imprisoned me In the spirit of the greatest feeling know to man Where a murmur of your lips Sends sighs echoing into my deepest confines Coming back saying something as simple as I love you Sweetheart D.Lester Young (07/31/02) Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, this is simply breathtaking!!! What a beautiful, sensual, and tender write.....I love it..... ![]() Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
mmm, and I thought there weren't any romantics left in the world, (except for Magnus of course) |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
That friction steams In a rainbow that said it all ahhhhhhhh, purrfect!! Sammie ^i^ |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I liked this beautiful and romantic work very much. *S* |
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