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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-08-08 07:02 AM


This one draws
words
in fossils etched
charcoals
in a shadow's dance
within
a flame of cave...

I am not sure
who is the chained--
we who read--
or he, who writes...

This one?
He makes Dante' smile.

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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2002-08-08 07:29 AM


I am not sure
who is the chained--
we who read--
or he, who writes...

Loved the profoundness of this phrase above Karen ... beautifully spoken, much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2002-08-08 07:46 AM


ms serene..funny about addiction..is it the user or the pusher?  the giver or the taker?  well we know that answer huh?  thanks for the thoughts babe, u b cool 1
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3 posted 2002-08-08 08:03 AM


Serenity~
Ya' pegged him~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunshine
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4 posted 2002-08-08 08:22 AM



and being addicted
to words
we are voracious in appetite
reading night/day
writing day/night

Excellent, Serene One...

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-08-08 08:49 AM


serenity,
You are cool water and I love to sip from your well. Excellent.

wranx
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6 posted 2002-08-08 09:50 AM


A very good look at that Dark Stranger. I have to agree, that cat is the smooothest sumagun on the block.


~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.      

Bukowski

Martie
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7 posted 2002-08-08 10:11 AM


serenity

Yes indeed...you see beyond eyes!

rwood
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8 posted 2002-08-08 10:19 AM


Your write is fabulous.. DS is a pleasure read and a good person behind the words..thanks for penning this. And just in case you didn't read my re to yours..green is not your color sweet poetess. Hugs!

Sincerely,
Reg

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