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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2002-07-31 07:40 AM

Tornado

The rumbling winds, the fear of death
The twister’s roar, the gasp for breath
The reach for something bound to earth
The second thoughts of life’s own worth

The spiral twists, the sudden turns
The season shifts, the candle burns
And still no where to lay your head
But in the coldness of your bed

The night unveils a secret thought
The bitter lesson life has taught
The cherished one you left behind
Spins in the funnel of your mind

“What if I had“; “What ifI’d not”
Two questions tied into a knot
And tumbling down upon your head
The weight of words you left unsaid

The twister spins your thoughts around
In echoes of the rumbling sound
Nowhere to hide or stay aground
You grab for soft of pillow’s down

Elizabeth Santos

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (07-31-2002 07:42 AM).]

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

1 posted 2002-07-31 07:43 AM

Wonderful! And no relief in dreams no doubt.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-07-31 08:59 AM

Excellent write Elizabeth!
How we often want to escape the turmoil in our mind.
~Hugs~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-07-31 01:24 PM

quote:
"What if I had"; "What if I’d not"
Two questions tied into a knot
And tumbling down upon your head
The weight of words you left unsaid

How often I have thought just this!?
IWIHWT...

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-07-31 01:26 PM

Awesome

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-07-31 09:39 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh Elizabeth, I understand how you feel, I used to feel part of all this turmoil deep inside of me and I just wanted to find a soft place to fall and shear through that ravine to find answers! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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