Open Poetry #21 |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
That kid in a candy store sound, of wonderment complete The same by heart expound, enthralled each quickened beat From whispers beyond tangible, beyond the seeking eye As spoken with you tenderly, each pulse the same reply Adoring you so far from here, in memory quite clear The same expressions passage of these distances so dear From once so long ago, to now so far ahead As spoken with you tenderly, the same to still be said And yet to be contented in the stillness of forget The same themes resurrected, the same impatience let From mystical proportions to silence of accept As spoken with you tenderly, each thought a promise kept Copyright Kkh 7/28/02 |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Just beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - nice to read you again. Many thoughts when I read this. This sentence is so powerful, great write. "As spoken with you tenderly, each thought a promise kept" BC |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I like the promise kept part it's reminiscent of something - but I can't think exactly what, Oh well it will come to me when I hear it again. ![]() Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
We should all look at new and exciting things like a kid in a candy store. I'm trying to get back to that. I've become jaded. Something I'm working on. Great Poem! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Adoring you so far from here, in memory quite clear The same expressions passage of these distances so dear From once so long ago, to now so far ahead As spoken with you tenderly, the same to still be said This feels like a sepia colored poem, Kathleen. When I read it, I can hear the sounds of old memories framed in lace. ![]() Lyra |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: Hitting home runs today, yes, you are... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you everyone. ThisDiamond "We dreamed we were stranges...but awoke to find we are dear to each other"... Author Unknown |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Knock knock! This has a lot of depth to it Kathy....seems of a relationship remembered, thinking of those times.....and the feelings around what was and what was not... Very well written... Barry |
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