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Open Poetry #21

Anything Blank

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-07-31 09:21 AM

Anything blank is a canvas
for the artist to fill
with the colors of life
with whatever he will.
To create a picture
or demonstrate emotion
blue, white capped
and you have the ocean.

A prism refracted
light in color blooms
the artist works diligently
in a barely lit room,
and with brush or pen
a masterpiece lives
with the life the artist
so skillfully gives.

WhiteRose

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-07-31 09:38 AM

What a beautiful reflection of art, both the poem and the sentiment.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

2 posted 2002-07-31 09:49 AM

It's amazing, the possibilities of an empty canvas. I like this very much White Rose!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

3 posted 2002-07-31 10:54 AM

As a rhymer myself, I appreciate one's ability to rhyme unforced, coupled with an excellent rhythm/flow. Of course, the content is important too.

You have done both extremely well with this write. Enjoyed!

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

4 posted 2002-07-31 11:49 AM

Very artfully expressed, Anne...

~ chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2002-07-31 02:05 PM

WhiteRose~
This is a fascinating piece ... ~

I love the thoughts thrown upon the canvas of life~
Made me think of our sweet Seymour who is not only a 'canvas' artist ... but a word-artist also~
I'm gonna make sure he sees this one~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-07-31 05:53 PM

WhiteRose
And she did, well done I enjoyed.

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