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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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(This is about my ex Greg. The little piece of scum.) "Been sitting here Can't get you off my mind... But the truth remains, You're gone." It said in a *N'sync song You're gone And their is nothing I can do Plus I didn't need a man with an attitude I wrote you one last letter When I got the reply back It sounded like it was over to me He told me not to keep in contact with his mom Which hurt me so Because we had grown so close He told me not to write or even call That told me right there It was over And now you're gone Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Man, give me a sword and put Greg in front of me and then just stand back and watch...  What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Nice write, a lot of emotion in this. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Julie, I'm so sorry he is treating you so unfairly, sweet friend, while you don't deserve his cruelty it saddens me to see him try to break you and her mom's friendship apart for I believe that is mean! (sad sigh) I hope soon things can calm and be worked out between all of this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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