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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-07-30 03:06 PM



I walked along, and studied hard
This dirt beneath my feet
I wondered if I'd treaded on
Someone who use to be
I know this is a morbid thought, but I wondered if the dirt I walk upon is, in fact, made partially of people from the past.

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-30 03:07 PM


Very interesting thout. Enjoyed!

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-07-30 04:10 PM


we are nothing but
dust to dust
ashes to ashes

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3 posted 2002-07-30 06:42 PM




(big hugggsssss) Oh Kristopher, no, I don't think this is a morbid thought because throughout history, it is interesting to know where we all have come from and know our ancestors and where they used to settle! (sigh) This is a very interesting and true thought, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-07-30 06:47 PM


Ooohhhhh.... awesome. A trippy thought, yet an interesting one - it's a splendid way of bringing out mortality to light. Well done, Kris. Again.

Sincerely,
Titus

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                  -Chad Kroger

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5 posted 2002-07-30 07:25 PM


Interesting thoughts Kris.  As always your words leave a lasting impression.

Take care....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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