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Moonlight Doesn’t Become You Krissy’s revenge shape poem
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Moonlight Doesn’t Become You Krissy’s revenge shape poem |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Moonlight Doesn’t Become You Krissy’s revenge When the moon fades the night’s light. And the stars sparkle with softly hushed light. If you hear a noise brush your ear. If you see a shadow fade then quickly disappear. When the breeze carries this within. A touch of shivering over your skin. Then Emma my little sister watch out for I’m coming after you so just look about. When the stars are glowing soft and low. When the wind speaks your name in a whispered Ohh. When the day has gone faded from view. And the night has risena gain anew. Then you’d better hope sweet little sis that the breeze only carries a zephyrs kiss. Because one night it’ll be me. Then you’ll recant every word won’t you Emmy? When the sun has left the sky to night And there’s a veil of dreams over your sight If you hear a noise upon the stair. Don’t be afraid sweet Emmabear. Goodness look at what I did. That nickname out of my pen just slid. Emmabear I’ll give you a big clap Now that’s better revenge than a poetic slap Krissy Okay little sis come and get it, not just a shape but rhyme, and sparkles, what more do you want? Ummmm I think that means I win hands down don’t you Emmabear? Whoops see it slipped out again. The line you’re looking for is not one word is true and Krissy doesn’t eat anything that is not tied down. Followed but the phrase you win again. And while thy willing soul transpiers at every pore with instant fires Andrew Marvell 1621-1678 [This message has been edited by Krissy (07-30-2002 11:44 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You're evil, Krissy... cute, but huggably evil...   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krissy, A wonderful write and a wonderful read. Enjoyed |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Krissy, I loved it but be gentle with your little sister.  Juanita |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A great comeback, Krissy... I just love these sisterly fights and the mother-daughterly ones too!  ~ superchipmunk hugsLyra |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Enjoyed this Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Krissy, this is so beautifully done... I absolutely love the little sparkles too! You are a bit of a devil aren't you?!  ~Hugs~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
We knew you wouldn't let her get away unscathed. *S* This is beautiful, Krissy... I like the sparkles. *S* |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (giggles in delight) Oh Krissy, yep, she must indeed be petrified now of your sparkling words, hehehe! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, I just love the fun you all have together, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This has to be the most beautiful presentation of a poem I've ever seen! WOW! Better be careful, Emma. Krissy is obviously a farce to be reckoned with!  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Krissy, give me the lowdown are you having a showdown? with you little sis let me tell you miss neither of you can win though it would be a sin to tell you so and stop this fight so keep on sparring all day and night. Auntie Kethp Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
A swinging left, dodged with dexterity A hook to the chin, partially deflected Feints, footwork....both combatants searching for a weakness Ooops....the judge is warning one of them Low Blow he said! Shamey Shamey! The fight continues, and the crowd is hushed with breathless anticipation.....Suddenly, one of them hits the canvas the thud of words against cheek like a gunshot in the auditorium An arm is raised, the bell is sounded. The victor is uhhhhh spoiled. *smile* The cool canvas is home to the loser. Whom is who? When will the verdict be announced? Emma-Bear vs. KrissyGal the crowd anxiously awaits the smoke to clear |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KrissyGal~ BEAUTIFUL ! You gals are such fun ! This is lovely and not one bit WONKY~ Love you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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