Moonlight Doesn’t Become You Krissy’s revenge shape poem

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Krissy
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since 2002-02-22

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kent England

0 posted 2002-07-30 11:40 AM

Moonlight Doesn’t Become You
Krissy’s revenge

When the moon fades
the night’s light. And the stars
sparkle with softly hushed  light. If
you hear a noise brush your ear. If you see
a shadow fade then quickly disappear. When the
breeze carries this within. A touch of shivering over
your skin. Then Emma my little  sister watch out for
I’m coming after you so just look about. When the stars
are glowing soft and low. When the wind speaks your
name in a whispered Ohh. When the day has gone faded
from view. And the night has risena  gain anew. Then
you’d better hope sweet little sis that the breeze only
carries a zephyrs kiss. Because one night it’ll be me.
Then you’ll recant every word won’t you Emmy?
When the  sun has left  the sky to night And
there’s a veil of dreams over your sight If
you hear a noise upon the stair. Don’t
be afraid sweet Emmabear.

Goodness
look at what I
did. That nickname
out of my pen just slid.
Emmabear I’ll give you
a big clap Now that’s
better revenge than
a poetic slap

Krissy

Okay little sis come and get it, not just a shape but rhyme, and sparkles, what more do you want? Ummmm I think that means I win hands down don’t you Emmabear? Whoops see it slipped out again. The line you’re looking for is not one word is true and Krissy doesn’t eat anything that is not tied down. Followed but the phrase you win again.

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

[This message has been edited by Krissy (07-30-2002 11:44 AM).]

Sunshine

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1 posted 2002-07-30 11:49 AM

You're evil, Krissy...
cute, but huggably evil...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-07-30 11:49 AM

Krissy,
A wonderful write and a wonderful read. Enjoyed

N orth Carolina Girl
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NC,USA

3 posted 2002-07-30 12:25 PM

Krissy,
I loved it but be gentle with your little sister.

Juanita
"Live,Love and Laugh"

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

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Michigan

4 posted 2002-07-30 01:36 PM

A great comeback, Krissy...
I just love these sisterly fights and the mother-daughterly ones too!

~ superchipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-07-30 01:43 PM

Enjoyed this

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-07-30 01:49 PM

Krissy, this is so beautifully done...
I absolutely love the little sparkles too!
You are a bit of a devil aren't you?!

~Hugs~

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2002-07-30 02:40 PM

We knew you wouldn't let her get away unscathed. *S* This is beautiful, Krissy... I like the sparkles. *S*

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-07-30 05:14 PM

(giggles in delight) Oh Krissy, yep, she must indeed be petrified now of your sparkling words, hehehe! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, I just love the fun you all have together, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2002-07-30 05:31 PM

This has to be the most beautiful presentation of a poem I've ever seen! WOW!

Better be careful, Emma. Krissy is obviously a farce to be reckoned with!

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

10 posted 2002-07-30 05:38 PM

Krissy,
give me the lowdown
are you having a showdown?
with you little sis
let me tell you miss
neither of you can win
though it would be a sin
to tell you so and stop this fight
so keep on sparring all day and night.
Auntie Kethp

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

ShadowRider
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since 2001-07-14

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11 posted 2002-07-30 09:58 PM

A swinging left, dodged with dexterity
A hook to the chin, partially deflected
Feints, footwork....both combatants searching for a weakness

Ooops....the judge is warning one of them

Low Blow he said! Shamey Shamey!

The fight continues, and the crowd is hushed
with breathless anticipation.....Suddenly, one of them hits the canvas
the thud of words against cheek like a gunshot in the auditorium

An arm is raised, the bell is sounded.
The victor is uhhhhh spoiled. *smile*
The cool canvas is home to the loser.

Whom is who?
When will the verdict be announced?
Emma-Bear vs. KrissyGal
the crowd anxiously awaits the smoke to clear

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2002-07-30 10:08 PM

KrissyGal~
BEAUTIFUL !
You gals are such fun !

This is lovely and not one bit WONKY~
Love you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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