Open Poetry #21 |
I'm back!!! |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Don't know if you really missed me Out of sight, out of heart they say I'm back from Drenten Heathland Just came in again yesterday A four day trip of hotter hotst And poor me can't stand the heat I've missed our bugman Balladeer Bugs ate me top down to my feet Thirty and more degrees Celsius I longed for some cool white snow While standing in open heatherland Yelling 'She's ok, just let her go' Again it was a beautiful trip Saw sun rise like a big red ball Low mist on acres still asleep No camera, so I've to tell you all The heather was of a purple color As far as your eyes could see sheep sheltered in the shadow under little groups of trees I saw the sheepdogs working Every time it's a beautiful sight To see a herd of fourhundred sheep moving through the landscape wide Yes I forgot to bring my camera You have to see it through my eyes I hope I've painted you a picture But there's no sound to hear my sighs Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, a wonderful picture, bugbites and all! Welcome home, Titia! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
If you missed something like Balladeer you must have had a terrible trip my dear!! Welcome back... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Wonderful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A beautiful picture you've shared through your words, Titia... and yes, you were missed. *S* Welcome baaaaaaaaaaaack. *G* (Sorry... couldn't resist. LOL) ROFL @ Toe and missing Bal. *G* |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Yes, I did miss you Titia. I am glad to see you back. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Titia, I know you must have had a lovely time up there, sweet friend, I love heather so so much, it is beautiful and has a gorgeous perfume and the sheepdogs I heard are so lovely and lively! (kiss on cheek) I'm so happy you're back, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Titia - glad you're safely home. It must be a sight to watch the sheepdogs working. Four hundred sheep, a lot it is... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome back Titia! Yes...you were missed... But, oh how I love Heather and do wish you would have had your camera there. Your words painted us a beautiful picture though. ~Hugs~ |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Tita hi there this is exceedingly good writing, you always write the scene so well it plays clearly on my mind, and this is so beautiful so incredibly well painted I loved it as mum would say I love it ‘utterly’ beautiful writing as always As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ Woman ... you were missed alright ! Wish I could have been there to see the heather ... I can just imagine that it was beautiful ! Welcome home sweetie ... Muys has been keeping me company while you were gone~ God, she's a sweetheart~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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